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Monday, November 18

More of Thom and Piper today. This scene is special. Achingly personal and tender. This is the song used. Start the song, then start the scene.


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10 comments:

  1. DNovember 19, 2013 at 12:38 AM

    "My eyes close as the sky ignites the image of this moment into burning cinders in my mind. I want to live in this sunset."

    <3 that is the best feeling and you describe it so well.

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  2. NikiNovember 19, 2013 at 4:25 AM

    So beautiful.xx

    dreaming is believing

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  3. ShelbyNovember 19, 2013 at 11:41 AM

    ugh... that song and this just did me in. it is perfect.

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  4. PrettyLiesNovember 19, 2013 at 4:50 PM

    Aw omg...this was awesome. I'm also doing NaNo, I was checking out your blog and wondered if you were doing it to. If you wanted to check mine out, the link is http://mynanowrimo2013.blogspot.com/. I really liked this, especially with the song, perfect. Good luck! Not even two more weeks!

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  5. laceyNovember 19, 2013 at 6:02 PM

    this song is perfectly matched with your words. it starts soft and builds into something big and beautiful. wonderful job.

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  6. HollyNovember 20, 2013 at 6:08 AM

    I love you

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  7. meg birdNovember 20, 2013 at 5:22 PM

    Your new blog layout looks amazing, by the way. And I'm so excited to keep reading this! Keep going.

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  8. UnknownNovember 21, 2013 at 6:28 AM

    My God girl...you can write.. you do magic with words, I got chills just by reading this...and read twice that last paragraph...I imagined myself in that situation and wanted to lay there forever as well...oh to capture a moment of love or two..how wonderful it would be to remain in those forever as if they were jars we could get ourselves into...a time capsule..yes!...something like that...

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  9. Jennie and HusbandNovember 21, 2013 at 8:00 AM

    perfect. simply perfect.

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  10. AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 5:18 PM

    i wanted to tell you my favorite parts, or phrases, but there are simply too many! and this song, this song! it has been my go-to for years, & seeing you put it up on your blog just made me love you all that much more. it is somehow the perfect combination tragic and beautiful. so much feeling. gorgeous writing, i cannot wait to read more!

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Thank you for your words; they light a fire in my heart. You are lovely.

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