Aw omg...this was awesome. I'm also doing NaNo, I was checking out your blog and wondered if you were doing it to. If you wanted to check mine out, the link is http://mynanowrimo2013.blogspot.com/. I really liked this, especially with the song, perfect. Good luck! Not even two more weeks!
My God girl...you can write.. you do magic with words, I got chills just by reading this...and read twice that last paragraph...I imagined myself in that situation and wanted to lay there forever as well...oh to capture a moment of love or two..how wonderful it would be to remain in those forever as if they were jars we could get ourselves into...a time capsule..yes!...something like that...
i wanted to tell you my favorite parts, or phrases, but there are simply too many! and this song, this song! it has been my go-to for years, & seeing you put it up on your blog just made me love you all that much more. it is somehow the perfect combination tragic and beautiful. so much feeling. gorgeous writing, i cannot wait to read more!
"My eyes close as the sky ignites the image of this moment into burning cinders in my mind. I want to live in this sunset."
ReplyDelete<3 that is the best feeling and you describe it so well.
So beautiful.xx
ReplyDeletedreaming is believing
ugh... that song and this just did me in. it is perfect.
ReplyDeleteAw omg...this was awesome. I'm also doing NaNo, I was checking out your blog and wondered if you were doing it to. If you wanted to check mine out, the link is http://mynanowrimo2013.blogspot.com/. I really liked this, especially with the song, perfect. Good luck! Not even two more weeks!
ReplyDeletethis song is perfectly matched with your words. it starts soft and builds into something big and beautiful. wonderful job.
ReplyDeleteI love you
ReplyDeleteYour new blog layout looks amazing, by the way. And I'm so excited to keep reading this! Keep going.
ReplyDeleteMy God girl...you can write.. you do magic with words, I got chills just by reading this...and read twice that last paragraph...I imagined myself in that situation and wanted to lay there forever as well...oh to capture a moment of love or two..how wonderful it would be to remain in those forever as if they were jars we could get ourselves into...a time capsule..yes!...something like that...
ReplyDeleteperfect. simply perfect.
ReplyDeletei wanted to tell you my favorite parts, or phrases, but there are simply too many! and this song, this song! it has been my go-to for years, & seeing you put it up on your blog just made me love you all that much more. it is somehow the perfect combination tragic and beautiful. so much feeling. gorgeous writing, i cannot wait to read more!
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